Feedback on our Re-tell

Today Madi, Jim, Isla and Bella re-told their story in their own words.  We recorded it on this video so that we could watch it back and give ourselves feedback.

Here is the video:




We thought we did a good job of:

• Collaborating to re-tell the story
• Collaborating when someone needed help (team work)
• We spoke clearly
• We looked at the person who was talking
• We used with pictures to help us remember it

We thought we could improve on:

• Giving all the information (like, saying they were going to the park)
• We could use one or two words from the story to remind us - but we don't want to read all the words.  "If you look at every page and read all the words, you'll get too slow and tired" - Jim

What do you think?